Scene 1 Script

[Tbone]

The following is a revised version of the script with emphasis on vocals. Please reply below to sign up to do a vocal part. We'd like to have as much talent as we can. We may, however, have to double up on some vocals, so be thinking of how versatile your voice can be!

Furious Angels

Presents

ALL GOOD THINGS


OPEN SCENE (SCENE 1)
Dramatic chase music. Open from black quick flash of feet as five operatives run up a staircase.

Flash to black. Music continues to play.

Male Operative #1: “Go, Go, Go.”

Sounds of running and panting.

Open from black with flash of operatives running across rooftop.

Flash to black. Music continues to play.

Male Operative #1: “Move it, Move it.”

Sounds of running and panting.

Open from black flash of operatives jumping from roof top to roof top

Flash to black. Music continues to play. Sound of operatives yelling.

Male Operative #2: “Hard lines are down!"

Male Operative #1: "Get to the access node”

Open from black flash of operatives running down a long stretch of road. In the background are the sights of Bathory Row

Flash to black. Music continues to play. Sound of operatives yelling.

Female Operative : “Hurry he’s right behind… "

Male Operative #2: "He’s gaining.”

Open from black view of an agent hyper jump as he lands upon the road and stands up slowly.

Flash to black. Music continues to play

Open from black long view of operatives running away from the agent. Zoom in view of agent as he fires a shot at fleeing operatives. Quick zoom out as bullet rushes out from gun, blur motion as slow mow and camera angle spins around turning the camera view back towards the fleeing operatives. Once camera turns full on towards operatives quick zoom in as bullet speeds on and takes out one of the operatives.

Flash to black. Music continues to play.

Female Operative: “Bolter is hit… he’s hit”

Open from black. Sideways camera view from one of the running operatives as they see the body of Bolter on the ground.

Flash to black. Music continues to play. Operative yells

Male Operative #2: “We're not gonna make it”

Open from black. Furthest operative back stops short. Animation of dual submachine guns. Close up view of operative looking back over his shoulder.

Flash to black. Music continues to play.

Male Operative #2 Scream

and sound of dual subs unloading…

Open from black. Close up animation of agent dodging bullets.

Flash to black. Music continues to play. Sound of single shot from agent weapon

Open from black. Animation of operative being blown flipping backwards. <possible>

Fade to black. Music continues to play. Operative yells.

Female Operative: “Flash is down!”

Male Operative #1: “Keep moving, get to the access node.”

Open from black. View of operatives targeted hyper jump onto roof of a warehouse. Two leading one trailing behind.

Fade to black. Music continues to play. Operatives yelling.

Male Operative #1: “Almost there, come on… Come on.”

Open from black. View of agent landing on rooftop

Fade to black. Music continues to play.

Female Operative yells. “Go, go.. I got it.”

Open from black. Two operatives at the access node one typing on the node while the other keeps watch, and glances back at the rooftop. Rooftop view camera low close to the legs of the operative who has guns held at his side, while down the long length of the roof the agent walks.

Fade to black. Music continues to play. Sounds of semi-automatic gunfire followed by the tell tale sound of single shots from the agent gun

Open from black. View of two operatives at the access node one continuing to work the other looking up towards the rooftop with guns drawn. First person view of glances towards the rooftop

Fade to black. Music continues to play. Sounds of footsteps on metal roof.

Male Operative #1 cursing. “Come on…”

Female Operative “Almost there, almost there.”

Male Operative #1 as if he wasn’t talking to the other to being with continues… “Come on, damnit… COME ON!!”

Open from black. Agent comes into view from rooftop

Fade to black. Music continues to play.

Male Operative #1 yells

and gun fire erupts.

Open from black. Single operative continues to work on the access node the body of his partner lays beside him.

Fade to black. Music continues to play. Sound of a hyperjump landing

Open from black. Close up view of operative working on access node as agent stands up behind him, and starts to bring weapon to bear.

Fade to black. Music continues to play.

Female Operative harsh whisper. “Got it.”

Sounds of access node activation and single gunshot.

Open from black. Two bodies lay at the feet of the agent as code streams up from the access node.

Agent #1 touches ear and states. “Retrieval of the data was unsuccessful. Secondary measures activated. Data search and decryption algorithms initiated.”

Slow fade to black as camera focus turns to flowing code from access node. Code shots off into the dark.

[Tbone]

Actors needed:

Male Operative #1 - done

"Go, go, go"
"Move it, move it."
"Get to the access node"
"Keep moving, get to the access nodes."
"Almost there, come on...come on."
"Come on..."
"Come on, damnit... COME ON!!"
*yell*

Male Operative #2 - scared, panicked

"Hard lines are down!"
"He's gaining."
"We're not gonna make it."
*scream*

Female Operative - nurturing, concerned

"Hurry he's right behind..."
"Bolter is hit...he's hit."
"Flash is down!"
"Go, go.. I got it."
"Almost there, almost there"
"Got it."

Agent #1 - done

"Retrieval of the data was unsuccessful. Secondary measures activated. data search and decryption algorithms initiated."

[Strod]

I'm up for anything I can help with.

[Adad]

Please sign up for one and try it.  We have exactly 3 weeks before the entire movie needs to be done, so if you want to give any of these lines a shot, please just take initiative and do it.  I will post info to my web space so you can upload your audition recordings.  If it doesn't work right, I won't use it, but we will have enough roles for everyone I should think.  The more options the better for me so please try, EVERYONE!

If anyone has not done this before.  Try downloading Audacity at http://audacity.sourceforge.net/download/ and set the quality to its highest for recordings.  Make sure your room is quiet as can be and record a little dead/silent space between each of your lines and record as many takes as you see fit.

This is your chance to be a part of the finale of something that has brought us all together and made us friends and borderline family for the last 5 years so take advantage of this opportunity.  Thanks guys and girls!!!

[Fuse]

I'll knock out a few of these either tonight or tomorrow.

[Adad]

For uploading your recordings.  It is best to keep them in WAV format, which free Audacity will make you do.  If you have an FTP client, simply upload it to:

Host: jwnettesheim.startlogic.com
User: FuriousAngel
Pass: FuriousAngels1!


As far as naming it.  Please use this convention:

Character Name in Script - Line if you split up recording - Take Number - FA Name

Example:

Male Operative 1 - Go, Go, Go - Take 1 - Adad
Female Operative - Hurry He's Right Behind - Take 2 - Lits


If you're doing all the lines at once for a character, no need to write the line in the title.

THANKS!

[Subb]

I've done a crack at the Agent voiceover but have used a voice effect to 'harden' the voice. If you're seriously in need of an Agent voice I'll submit it; once I find out where to host it :p

Oh, and I have a good plugin that's amazing at voice effects for stuff like over the phone, headset, crackling connection etc. I did a good effect on the 'We're not gonna make it!' line which would've sounded awesome at the end of a trailer followed by a gun shot, imo Heh. I'll try to have a go at these voice overs since the chances of me being able to star in this video are very slim

EDIT: Thanks Adad

[NoCry]

thanks for this functionality; will try a few later.

[Manic Velocity]

I'll take a crack at both Male Operative voices.  I'll leave it to Adad to decide which ones to use.  I've never thought my voice had the right timbre for an agent, but I'll give it a shot as well for shits and giggles.

When I recorded my voiceover for Angels of Vengeance, I recited each single line three to five times with different pitch and tone, but it was all recorded in one file.  Would it be ok if I did it this way again, or would you prefer the recordings be broken up?

[Adad]

All in one is more than fine.  That usually comes off more natural anyways.

[Tbone]

All in one is more than fine.  That usually comes off more natural anyways.

That's what she said.

[Adad]

well played sir.

[Adad]

Also, if you do not have an FTP client and your files are small enough, you can email them to me at

maddogjwn13@hotmail.com

[Sared]

Friend of mine works at the college recording studio, he's going to bring me up and we'll record some clips and see what we can come up with.

[Adad]

Only TBone has submitted lines so far.  I need more people, PLEASE