Ahhh... Time to relax

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Audience members identify MORE with a detailed character... in script writing one or more characters should appeal to just about anyone in the target audience, so the they can place themselves in that position. Personally, I like Subb's idea of the overlapping voice intro of the backstories... the same kind of unit was employed in the intro to all three Xmen movies and was well recieved, a kind of vocal montage to set the mood right off the bat. You want to set the world of the movie at first sight to grab the audience and capture the world as much as possible.

I'm thinking we SHOULD focus on at least some of the emotional sides of being an operative in FA through a handful of central characters supported by the rest of the faction. These are called "static" and "dynamic." The small handful that are dynamic characters have an emotional journey that the audience can follow and relate to while the static characters provide a base for it. I think we should focus on the hardships of being us working within in the Matrix: dealing with the stress of a cold war, mounting tensions among us resolving into stronger bonds, and undying loyalty to the cause no matter the personal, emotional, psychological, and physical sacrifices. I think THAT would be a great point to the movie. "We've been through Hell, and we'd do it again, because that's how strong we are as a unit."

Just my opinion.